Metaphor/Simile Activity

playing touch

I was running towards the try line with passion and a rugby ball passing everyone around me. Our classroom was playing touch and I was going to score the first try. When I ran passed the try line and pIaced the ball down, I  felt so proud. I ran back feeling confident and went to join the line, just as I was about too my foot sunk in a hole. Suddenly my whole body hit the floor- wack! I twisted my ankle it was pain foul I couldn't walk for 2 days.

Touch

I was running towards the try line with passion and a rugby ball passing everyone around me. Our classroom was playing touch and I was going to score the first try. When I ran passed the try line and pIaced the ball down, I  felt so proud. I ran back feeling confident and went to join the line, just as I was about too my foot sunk in a hole. Suddenly my whole body hit the floor- wack! I twisted my ankle.